Next week!

Hi i have some honest feedback i hope you wont take it to heart but, i was reading as option #1 both point of view, there it way to much text to read through 15 minutes in and in and I'm still read the back story, i was getting board i would say yo could cut the text down by 25% or even 50% and its still a good story it just seems way to long winded, i get the back story makes or breaks a good V.N. i understand its a fine line between to not enough and the first love to perfect but the there's perfect to much, I've read over 500 V.N.'s in the last 2 and have discovered that 1 - 2 sentences per page seems to be the sweet spot but no more that 3, don't get me wrong the story is good and i dare say many people would agree, and from the first  sex scene i've never wised it would end EVER, an that was from his P O V !!!