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Alright, Fight Club and Nine Inch Nails references in one scene. This dev is on my level. 🤣

Not everybody catches my references, but there are a lot of them in the story.

Can you realese a mobile support for the game?

There already is an Android port of the game in the downloads.

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I dunno why but when i tried playing it the logo at the beggining was stuck and im unable to move on. Id appreciate any help on how to fix it it looks like an enjoyable game pity

Try pressing and holding the shift key when starting the program and selecting a different renderer and disabling the other options there when the menu comes up

Its like that the button panels dont show up

it looks like you're using an android phone. Make sure there is enough free space on the phone for the game to run. All else failing it might not be able to run on your phone.

10GB free space

Personally after making the new chapter I do feel like the prettiest chapter should be longer with some of the other chapters sprinkled in at the end personally because I feel you can get by these chapters a little bit too quickly especially if you spam click through the dialogue

Hey it says Chapter 13 but when I download all it plays through is part of chapter 6? Or am I missing something?

Chapter 13 is still in progress but you should be able to play through Chapter 12. If you are loading an old save, I suggest starting a new game. If you continue to have the problem, please let me know unless you're on a Mac, I have no way to test that.

Hey, thanks for the quick reply, apparently I had a old copy or something and never updated it. Also thanks for the fun game!!

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No troubles

Glad you are enjoying the game!

i realy like this one, but sometimes it kinda creeps me out when they have no facial expression 😅

Is there anal scene?

yes there are optional anal scenes

Just out of curiosity sake how long will the completed game be and will it be free or do you have to buy it?

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Right now, it is unknown how long the complete game will be.

It will be free (but do take donations).

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any femdom in this game and character name, please?

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There are none

Just finished this, though I usually prefer more choices (personal preference is more toward a game), this has to be one of the best stories I have read. Cudos on this and keep up the good work.

Thank you very much. I`have been leaning more towards a story than a game on this.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Have you played Chasing Sunsets? That also has a fantastic story and some of the best renders in the industry? I'm luving the direction this story is going so far!

I have heard of it but I have not played, it would take away from me making my game.

Thank you.

Hey iv got a problem i fully closed the app down while it was i na replay scene and now its stuck going thought all the story after the replay scene after the scene finished the exit button dosent work and i dont know if i should uninstall and re install the game because i dont know if i will lose my progress. Can anyone help

Try right-clicking on the screen and see if there is an option to exit replay in the menu (on the left). If renpy is in replay mode, that should show. If it's not there, then you are in normal play, you should try to load an older saved game.

Im on android i cant right-click the screen and the game took away all the options on the right exept the exit replay button which is glitched

Okay, wow I just tried the same thing on my phone and it breaks renpy.  I went tap crazy just to get to the end of the game, after that everything was fine. I don't know if re-installing it would fix the problem, since renpy creates a special save game that is loaded when the game restarted. I don't know where the saved games are stored in android, so I got nothing for you man, sorry.

Its alright i guess ill just hope the save is in the phone storage

Great Update, felt a bit short but... Quality takes time. 

Over all the game is outstanding. The Characters and the enviorement is unique designed and it shows the love that is put into the VN.

Thank you very much!

It could be because of the alternate scenes, if you reject Lucy you will see one of them in this chapter

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Are you sure you have the right game?

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sorry i tend to ask stuff before i look, i figured it out

btw i really like this game ya did som mighty fine work on this ;) 

No troubles.


Thank you very much.

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I love all the incest in this game, and i know the fact it's not the player character and his family member that is likely allowing you to keep Pateron income, but I'd love for an aunt or cousin of MC to turn up and get added to the harem.

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You'll want to hang around for the next novel!!

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I think I love you haha

But in all seriousness, that's fantastic to hear. Take your time with Almost Dead, that's still amazing. Also, in your incest game, the more family members you can fuck the better :D I only said Aunt and cosuin because the MC in this game have no living immediate family, so Aunt and Cousin would be the only real options.

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thoughts?

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My dude, my guy, I'm a huge fan of full incest games where you can get your full blooded mom and sisters pregnant (and other female relatives too), or fuck and creampie them at least even if pregnancy isn't in the game yet or at all. Family Venture and Tales From The Unending Void are two really good examples.
But yea, I'm in favour of creampies for mom sisters aunts cousins, and grandmothers depending on the various character ages. Grandmas House is a good game for that.
Step family incest isn't terrible, but it's not great. It always feels like the game has been censored. Which to be fair is sometimes the actual case. But that can be typically fixed with official patches that restore content by changing the script of what what the player reads and what the characters all say etc.  Grandmas House is again a good example of that. 

Depth's Revival has a patch/mod that changes the script and adds in incest scenes that had to be cut because they couldn't be changed from family without changing the story completely.

The worst thing you could do is go down the Landlady and Housemate route, where your mom is your "landlandy" and your sisters are your "housemates". It's painful to play and read and just annoys everyone. Everyone knows it's a censored incest game. Stories that use this "workaround" make no sense because they're typically obviously written first with full incest then changed after, making everything weird. There's no taboo about wanting to fuck your hot landlady or housemates. Why are you do loyal to your landlady and housemates? So much stuff is just stupid. 

But I've ranted enough for one comment haha. 

My point is, if you can and are willing to, I'd be delighted to play a game by you where you get to fuck and cum in all your female relatives, and any other characters you have in the story. And ideally get them pregnant as some point. Oh, I say all, but I personally don't enjoy playing games where you're the father and you go after your daughters.

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What I'm planning it more of a kinetic novel, not so much a game. But it just about the brother and his stepsister. I will be telling it uniquely, I think. I have all the dialogue written already and the renpy script roughed out, it just needs an ass load of images rendered for it.

If an Aunt/cousin did appear, it could open up the possibility that Father was a bit incestuous too. Cousin could also be half-sister.

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I'm currently playing the new chapter (11), and I just want to restate my love and appreciation at how openly and frequently all the characters say "I love you" to each other. Especially MC, far too many Harem games have all the girls say they love MC but nearly never have MC say I love you to his girls. 

This game is so sweet and wholesome, and very very sexy. 

Speaking of sexy, I'd also like to restate my love for how many of the girls have hairy pussys.

Also, the story is still a great as ever. 

Fantastic update, but fuck me did it feel way way too short

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If you want to see more, try the new chapter without Lucy and Charlie. (bonus scene with A)

WHAT you want me to reject a girl? GTFO.

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Thank you, that means a lot to me!

I will have to say that for all of the VNs that I have watched, this one is by far the best one. The storyline is crisp and the characters are very relatable to the MC and the dialogue is fantastic. There are a few spelling errors in some of the dialogue, but nothing that a review wouldn't fix. I will say that I love the drop ins from other shows/movies such as "Serenity" and others. I laughed when I caught those Easter eggs and just smiled and said to myself, "Oh, they took that one from....". All in all, this is a very well put together novel and I am looking forward to your next "Chapter" of this fantastic event. Keep up the fantastic work. Keep us posted on the new development.

Thank you very much!!

If you spot an error, please do point it out as the editor and I have gone over the dialogue (we're human after all) and some things slip past us.

I do enjoy working lines from movies, tv shows and music in to the story!!

There are DevLog updates here, twitter, discord and Patreon every Monday. This coming Monday will be 6 weeks working on chapter 11.

I'll go back through it again when I have time this week and find the spelling that I saw in my first go through and write its location down so you can go directly to it. Thanks for reading my review and submissions. You guys keep kicking it. You're doing a fantastic job. All my best.

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this is one of My fv harem content i ever read/play its just perfect. every carácter its awesome. waiting for the next part. (btw sorry if my English its not perfect. hablo español.)

Thank you, I'm glad you have enjoyed it. Currently, I am about half way finished with the next chapter, so maybe another 5-6 weeks to finish.

(Solo entiendo el español que Google traduce para mí.)

i litteraly just finish My re-play of the Game XD just loveit that much. i know its your story but! more drama with the bitch of sicka and more kid!! oh and more A scream time. XD ok ill stop. amazin Game. 10/10 can't wait for more. 

Thank you :)

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Oh, important thing I'd like to praise, I love how most of the girls have hairy pussies. That is so rare. most games most girls are completely shaved and there would be a few not shaved but there'd be barely any hair. Glad this game is different

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🖖

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One thing I find kinda funny is how the MC is supposed to be Irish, but looks very Chinese or Korean. Obviously people of all backgrounds can be Irish or any other nationality, but I just find it funny. Especially when MC is shown to not speak Mandarin very well.

I really hope I'm not sounding racist or anything. Also, this specific actor is whose face i keep expecting to see; Ji-Hoon Pyo.

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Maybe just a little since you're basing his ethnicity from his skin color and hair (but everybody seems to be doing that) and that's partly my fault I chose a crappy skin for him and I had limited hair options when I started and now if just a bit of a running joke for me at least.😄

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As a bisexual guy myself, I just want to say thank you for having it pointed out that Dr Apples cheating ex, is a bastard for cheating, not because he's bisexual. It's super offensive to have female bisexuality treated normally if sexually, but male bisexuality treated as disgusting and worth dumping over. So thank you for not doing that. Having Tina not see what was wrong with three guys having consensual sex together, but getting mad about the lying and cheating is the good way to things.

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👍👌

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 i like it  .kinda hard to understand sometimes but its good and this was my first time playing and it sucked 6 hours out of me before i knew it. Polish that diction and id like it alot more

What was hard to understand about it?

The vocabulary was a bit weird ( like the "uhhh"s  and stuff,  change of names was also weird ( like how the would be calling Christina  tina  out of nowhere . there's better examples but im drawing a blank rn.  The scenes transitions caught me off guard  but i grew to expect it, the faces some of the characters made kind of threw me off in the sex scenes because they looked  as if noting was happening then would switch to a face of enjoyment was weird.  still really enjoyed it tho

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in my defense (not an excuse) this is my first VN and I have learned a lot same for animating with daz.

Q called her Tina while A called her Christina and the MC was unsure till after he asked her.

Glad you were able to enjoy it!

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Nice Job on the new chapter. Can´t wait until Sica "gets  screwed" over, she realy deserves it.

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Thank you very much !!

Chapter is going to be a good chapter :)

Yeah, I was kind of hoping there would be a shot of the room window from the outside where Jessica would be looking at the main house and hearing Sara screaming in pleasure. Just thought it would be funny to see that and her reaction.

I had thought of something like that, but Jessica might have enjoyed watching them, so no.

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Damn! That broad take the fun out of shit :)

She will be gone in the next chapter!!

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Yeah, the MC will probably be singing, "Shot to the heart and your so vain, honey, you give love a bad name." LoL

Will this game ever have pregnancy?

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Yes since chapter 8.

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Fair enough.

Why does Tina, A, and Q call everyone sister?

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Because there are all a part of one family now!

I can't wait for the next chapter it is killing me

I have completed 146 of 225 images and animations for the next chapter, so fa.

I do devlogs updates here every Monday to keep everybody updated. When I hit the total, I should be able to release the next chapter after a few days to finalize and check everything!!

well  i think you will be happy

Is it animated?

The sex scenes are (if that helps)

Yeah I meant that only, thank you for letting me know!

whale-cum

Is there any mega link for Android version?

https://mega.nz/file/IoMjxCJR#KxwpIXS9OqGS_g47duTxP2uGwA3--Enghid8i8ES1oo

there ya go!

Can you add a hide textbox button or swipe down to hide the textbox?

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There is an option in the preferences' menu to hide the text box

I mean to hide the text itself.

How do you unlock numbers 20, 21 and 22 in the gallery menu? 

When Sara asks "You don't mind if I change into something more comfortable?"

select "Uuuuhhmm We can talk later, Sara?"

pressing the H key will hide the text and text box, press again or click to bring them back

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Dude absolutely loved your visual novel and all those little references you made absolutely made my day. Absolutely loved the shwama one from avengers.

Thank you
I do enjoy hiding stuff in the game, there's over 50++ references in there so far!!
I stopped keeping track of them after chapter 7

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Would like to know what happened to Nurse Lane, everyone else from the hospital has appeared again in some capacity. Also, Alice has only appeared once, which is fine but I don't think a reason was given.

Also think you might need to add a few extra scenes, even just static images, to help build the relationship between Tina and MC, up to and including Ibiza. At the moment its kind of they like each other and next thing you know she's his soulmate. I accept these things can happen quickly especially when people are in fragile circumstances, ie bad breakup and life altering medical emergency, but I think there still needs to be a bit more bonding time between them, to justify it being more than a few dates and then move on.

I know you've gone back and tinkered with some of the earlier scenes, (I like the changes,) but I hope that the first threesome scene and the first sex scene with Apple are still on the list, at least for android. In the threesome scene the two girls are ok, but the mc looks like he's pale green, and the way Apples hair moves really doesnt work that well when she's riding the MC.

Also phone conversation between MC and Judge Nishimura, the word 'friendh' is misspelled, and later during their date I believe '0racle' needs an O not a 0.

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Yes, Nurse Lane will be back. Alice will also be back. I will at some point go back and redo some animations, but I get so little time when I'm always working on the next chapter!

The h has been removed (Thank you). If you look closely, it's 0rac1le a 0 and 1 a small salute to the Matrix movies (I mentioned the oracle and the one) !!

I got the link to the matrix, but missed the 1, so I missed the overall point there. Just glad it was intentional.

As for the work in general, I can only say that I like where the story appears to be going. Whilst Im not a fan of the overuse of Bi chracters, I accept that it makes setting up a poly relationship a lot easier. I also like the idea of including other pairings/subgroups in the overall group as Im sure that group members with benefits is the only realistic way for a larger group to function, a large harem simply couldnt work with only one focus, too many of the group members would be getting too little attention.

Something that I thought of in the last reading, I would imagine that the group would require a current STD checkup before someone can join the group, prefereably before having sex with anyone outside the group.

I would also expect top class lawyers to be able to write a contract that mimics the way a marriage works. Like a prenup without the actual wedding. Name change to give a family name, covering asset protection/divorce/inheritance to protect the rest of the family, most of all the children. Also, there is nothing to stop the MC giving rings to people without a traditional wedding.

Not sure who would officiate at the wedding though, perhaps Noahs mum to officiate and her boyfriend to give the bride(s) away. Yui might also be a good choice, but the problem there is that she might want to be part of the Strong family too.

I could see the MC asking Q&A to arrange this as a surprise for Tina, and then having a second arrangement with whoever is officiating to ensure that rings are available for eveyone so they could all get 'married' right after on the same day. (No need to change to wedding dresses, naked ceremony, like Star Trek.)

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Everything happens too fast and it looks like jumping to the good parts of the story, cutting the challenges, the conflicts, the problem solving... and going direct to the prize. Theres a lot of: minutes later, the next day, a week later and i think these cuts can be filled with the missing parts of a good story structure.

Its nice to see the quality of the animations improving in the new chapters.

Really like the movie references.

Good work and keep improving

hi i have come across a possable bug in 0.7, i finish 0.5 saved it where you go to sleep at the end copied the save file into 0.7 tried to load the save file and it crashes hard i saved the traceback log as always i hope this help  to a hotfix for 0.7.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

AttributeError: 'TransformState' object has no attribute 'size'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 316, in bootstrap

    renpy.main.main()

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\main.py", line 578, in main

    run(restart)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\main.py", line 143, in run

    renpy.execution.run_context(True)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\execution.py", line 908, in run_context

    context.run()

  File "scripts/chapter_05.rpyc", line 1095, in script

  File "scripts/chapter_05.rpyc", line 1095, in script

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\ast.py", line 708, in execute

    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\exports.py", line 1345, in say

    who(what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 1142, in __call__

    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 842, in do_display

    **display_args)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 591, in display_say

    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\ui.py", line 297, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 2702, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 3194, in interact_core

    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 2094, in draw_screen

    renpy.config.screen_height,

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 490, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6805)

    rv = render(root, width, height, st, st)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "accelerator.pyx", line 107, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render

AttributeError: 'TransformState' object has no attribute 'size'

Windows-8-6.2.9200

Ren'Py 7.3.5.606

Almost Dead 0.7

Thu Dec 02 05:18:54 2021

Is there any way you could send me the save file ? So I can take a look at it.

If you have discord, just dump it on my server, or put it somewhere where I can download it. That would be great!!

Also the newest version is .8 and .9 will be out in 1-2 weeks

umm i think so maybe MEGAsynk as a upload might be able to

https://workupload.com/file/kPLqfnDFwsY

Ok I got it. Thanks

Hey, great game so far. Is a reunion with Christe planed?

Yes she will be back in the next chapter (chapter 9) coming out in the 2nd or 3rd week of December.

Wow cool and thanks for the reply. 

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Could someone please tell me how to copy over the saves from .7 to .8? When I copy the game/saves folder I get the same error as already reported by Ghryst below. I also tried re-zipping my last save but no success...

Thanks a lot in advance!

Try removing the save directory completely (move it somewhere else) then rerun the game and try to load a saved game.

all saved games are stored in the directory C:\Users\(your login name here)\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\Almost_Dead-1966021355

The AppData is a hidden directory, but you can get there easily by pressing the Windows key and R at the same time and type in %appdata% . That will open the FileExplorer to the AppData\Roaming\ directory.

Thanks for the instructions. However, it didn´t help but I found out that only the last few save games could no longer be loaded. Luckily I do not have to start from the beginning ;-)

Love the game so far, and you have me in tears with the references, it's shiny!

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"Shiny, Let's be bad guys"

Glad you are enjoying it so far!!

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Is there NTR or any other kind of cuckold shit in game?

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NO!

Awesome!

Love the new Chapter. Waiting to see what that girl turns the Host like club into though. or if she ever finds out the the "Client" really is. Dang it if you have a PM on here I would talk to you there.

I'm on discord mostly (unless the machine is rendering, or I'm at work) there is a link in the main menu of the game and my profile here.

Ok.

What's the link?

https://discord.gg/UE9aPVrdNy

this is my first time playing this game, i have played many before, but as i scrolled down in the comments i see that this is your first project, the others that i played had been second or even final projects, but this one looks much much better than any of the ones i played before, congrats, (basically if you didnt understand my grammar, this is better than the other ones i played)

Thank you very much!

started playing, so good, very very nice job

I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you!

whats this update for?

I added some pictures from chapter 7 and updated the old ones from chapter 1.

oh ok

did it send out a notice that something changed??

Yeah but it didnt say.

Its probably already been mentioned, but the threesome scene (evening after the will reading) the protaganist looks positively green. (Android tablet, version 7.)

First sex scene with Apple, you might want to consider a slightly different POV so that her hair doesnt interfere with the scene quite so much.

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I am slowly going over the older animations to make them better and better quality.

Thank you.

you should make a logo for your game tab btw, make it something meaningful to the game or you. i get lost when hurry picking the game i want to play and pick another one. idk if anyone else has that issue but a logo would help you stand out also.

What do you mean by a logo ?

most games have there own logo like My New Family has lucy or lil cat for there.

i think i got it

pick whatever you want, i know itll be good. btw who is chapter 8 gonna focus on, just a hint is all i ask lol.

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