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One thing I find kinda funny is how the MC is supposed to be Irish, but looks very Chinese or Korean. Obviously people of all backgrounds can be Irish or any other nationality, but I just find it funny. Especially when MC is shown to not speak Mandarin very well.

I really hope I'm not sounding racist or anything. Also, this specific actor is whose face i keep expecting to see; Ji-Hoon Pyo.

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Maybe just a little since you're basing his ethnicity from his skin color and hair (but everybody seems to be doing that) and that's partly my fault I chose a crappy skin for him and I had limited hair options when I started and now if just a bit of a running joke for me at least.😄

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As a bisexual guy myself, I just want to say thank you for having it pointed out that Dr Apples cheating ex, is a bastard for cheating, not because he's bisexual. It's super offensive to have female bisexuality treated normally if sexually, but male bisexuality treated as disgusting and worth dumping over. So thank you for not doing that. Having Tina not see what was wrong with three guys having consensual sex together, but getting mad about the lying and cheating is the good way to things.

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👍👌

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 i like it  .kinda hard to understand sometimes but its good and this was my first time playing and it sucked 6 hours out of me before i knew it. Polish that diction and id like it alot more

What was hard to understand about it?

The vocabulary was a bit weird ( like the "uhhh"s  and stuff,  change of names was also weird ( like how the would be calling Christina  tina  out of nowhere . there's better examples but im drawing a blank rn.  The scenes transitions caught me off guard  but i grew to expect it, the faces some of the characters made kind of threw me off in the sex scenes because they looked  as if noting was happening then would switch to a face of enjoyment was weird.  still really enjoyed it tho

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in my defense (not an excuse) this is my first VN and I have learned a lot same for animating with daz.

Q called her Tina while A called her Christina and the MC was unsure till after he asked her.

Glad you were able to enjoy it!

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Nice Job on the new chapter. Can´t wait until Sica "gets  screwed" over, she realy deserves it.

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Thank you very much !!

Chapter is going to be a good chapter :)

Yeah, I was kind of hoping there would be a shot of the room window from the outside where Jessica would be looking at the main house and hearing Sara screaming in pleasure. Just thought it would be funny to see that and her reaction.

I had thought of something like that, but Jessica might have enjoyed watching them, so no.

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Damn! That broad take the fun out of shit :)

She will be gone in the next chapter!!

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Yeah, the MC will probably be singing, "Shot to the heart and your so vain, honey, you give love a bad name." LoL

Will this game ever have pregnancy?

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Yes since chapter 8.

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Fair enough.

Why does Tina, A, and Q call everyone sister?

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Because there are all a part of one family now!

I can't wait for the next chapter it is killing me

I have completed 146 of 225 images and animations for the next chapter, so fa.

I do devlogs updates here every Monday to keep everybody updated. When I hit the total, I should be able to release the next chapter after a few days to finalize and check everything!!

well  i think you will be happy

Is it animated?

The sex scenes are (if that helps)

Yeah I meant that only, thank you for letting me know!

whale-cum

Is there any mega link for Android version?

https://mega.nz/file/IoMjxCJR#KxwpIXS9OqGS_g47duTxP2uGwA3--Enghid8i8ES1oo

there ya go!

Can you add a hide textbox button or swipe down to hide the textbox?

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There is an option in the preferences' menu to hide the text box

I mean to hide the text itself.

How do you unlock numbers 20, 21 and 22 in the gallery menu? 

When Sara asks "You don't mind if I change into something more comfortable?"

select "Uuuuhhmm We can talk later, Sara?"

pressing the H key will hide the text and text box, press again or click to bring them back

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Dude absolutely loved your visual novel and all those little references you made absolutely made my day. Absolutely loved the shwama one from avengers.

Thank you
I do enjoy hiding stuff in the game, there's over 50++ references in there so far!!
I stopped keeping track of them after chapter 7

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Would like to know what happened to Nurse Lane, everyone else from the hospital has appeared again in some capacity. Also, Alice has only appeared once, which is fine but I don't think a reason was given.

Also think you might need to add a few extra scenes, even just static images, to help build the relationship between Tina and MC, up to and including Ibiza. At the moment its kind of they like each other and next thing you know she's his soulmate. I accept these things can happen quickly especially when people are in fragile circumstances, ie bad breakup and life altering medical emergency, but I think there still needs to be a bit more bonding time between them, to justify it being more than a few dates and then move on.

I know you've gone back and tinkered with some of the earlier scenes, (I like the changes,) but I hope that the first threesome scene and the first sex scene with Apple are still on the list, at least for android. In the threesome scene the two girls are ok, but the mc looks like he's pale green, and the way Apples hair moves really doesnt work that well when she's riding the MC.

Also phone conversation between MC and Judge Nishimura, the word 'friendh' is misspelled, and later during their date I believe '0racle' needs an O not a 0.

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Yes, Nurse Lane will be back. Alice will also be back. I will at some point go back and redo some animations, but I get so little time when I'm always working on the next chapter!

The h has been removed (Thank you). If you look closely, it's 0rac1le a 0 and 1 a small salute to the Matrix movies (I mentioned the oracle and the one) !!

I got the link to the matrix, but missed the 1, so I missed the overall point there. Just glad it was intentional.

As for the work in general, I can only say that I like where the story appears to be going. Whilst Im not a fan of the overuse of Bi chracters, I accept that it makes setting up a poly relationship a lot easier. I also like the idea of including other pairings/subgroups in the overall group as Im sure that group members with benefits is the only realistic way for a larger group to function, a large harem simply couldnt work with only one focus, too many of the group members would be getting too little attention.

Something that I thought of in the last reading, I would imagine that the group would require a current STD checkup before someone can join the group, prefereably before having sex with anyone outside the group.

I would also expect top class lawyers to be able to write a contract that mimics the way a marriage works. Like a prenup without the actual wedding. Name change to give a family name, covering asset protection/divorce/inheritance to protect the rest of the family, most of all the children. Also, there is nothing to stop the MC giving rings to people without a traditional wedding.

Not sure who would officiate at the wedding though, perhaps Noahs mum to officiate and her boyfriend to give the bride(s) away. Yui might also be a good choice, but the problem there is that she might want to be part of the Strong family too.

I could see the MC asking Q&A to arrange this as a surprise for Tina, and then having a second arrangement with whoever is officiating to ensure that rings are available for eveyone so they could all get 'married' right after on the same day. (No need to change to wedding dresses, naked ceremony, like Star Trek.)

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Everything happens too fast and it looks like jumping to the good parts of the story, cutting the challenges, the conflicts, the problem solving... and going direct to the prize. Theres a lot of: minutes later, the next day, a week later and i think these cuts can be filled with the missing parts of a good story structure.

Its nice to see the quality of the animations improving in the new chapters.

Really like the movie references.

Good work and keep improving

hi i have come across a possable bug in 0.7, i finish 0.5 saved it where you go to sleep at the end copied the save file into 0.7 tried to load the save file and it crashes hard i saved the traceback log as always i hope this help  to a hotfix for 0.7.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

AttributeError: 'TransformState' object has no attribute 'size'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 316, in bootstrap

    renpy.main.main()

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\main.py", line 578, in main

    run(restart)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\main.py", line 143, in run

    renpy.execution.run_context(True)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\execution.py", line 908, in run_context

    context.run()

  File "scripts/chapter_05.rpyc", line 1095, in script

  File "scripts/chapter_05.rpyc", line 1095, in script

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\ast.py", line 708, in execute

    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\exports.py", line 1345, in say

    who(what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 1142, in __call__

    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 842, in do_display

    **display_args)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\character.py", line 591, in display_say

    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\ui.py", line 297, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 2702, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 3194, in interact_core

    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\core.py", line 2094, in draw_screen

    renpy.config.screen_height,

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 490, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6805)

    rv = render(root, width, height, st, st)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "Z:\home\gatez\Desktop\Almost Dead 0.7\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render

    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)

    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):

  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)

    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)

  File "accelerator.pyx", line 107, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render

AttributeError: 'TransformState' object has no attribute 'size'

Windows-8-6.2.9200

Ren'Py 7.3.5.606

Almost Dead 0.7

Thu Dec 02 05:18:54 2021

Is there any way you could send me the save file ? So I can take a look at it.

If you have discord, just dump it on my server, or put it somewhere where I can download it. That would be great!!

Also the newest version is .8 and .9 will be out in 1-2 weeks

umm i think so maybe MEGAsynk as a upload might be able to

https://workupload.com/file/kPLqfnDFwsY

Ok I got it. Thanks

Hey, great game so far. Is a reunion with Christe planed?

Yes she will be back in the next chapter (chapter 9) coming out in the 2nd or 3rd week of December.

Wow cool and thanks for the reply. 

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Could someone please tell me how to copy over the saves from .7 to .8? When I copy the game/saves folder I get the same error as already reported by Ghryst below. I also tried re-zipping my last save but no success...

Thanks a lot in advance!

Try removing the save directory completely (move it somewhere else) then rerun the game and try to load a saved game.

all saved games are stored in the directory C:\Users\(your login name here)\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\Almost_Dead-1966021355

The AppData is a hidden directory, but you can get there easily by pressing the Windows key and R at the same time and type in %appdata% . That will open the FileExplorer to the AppData\Roaming\ directory.

Thanks for the instructions. However, it didn´t help but I found out that only the last few save games could no longer be loaded. Luckily I do not have to start from the beginning ;-)

Love the game so far, and you have me in tears with the references, it's shiny!

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"Shiny, Let's be bad guys"

Glad you are enjoying it so far!!

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Is there NTR or any other kind of cuckold shit in game?

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NO!

Awesome!

Love the new Chapter. Waiting to see what that girl turns the Host like club into though. or if she ever finds out the the "Client" really is. Dang it if you have a PM on here I would talk to you there.

I'm on discord mostly (unless the machine is rendering, or I'm at work) there is a link in the main menu of the game and my profile here.

Ok.

What's the link?

https://discord.gg/UE9aPVrdNy

this is my first time playing this game, i have played many before, but as i scrolled down in the comments i see that this is your first project, the others that i played had been second or even final projects, but this one looks much much better than any of the ones i played before, congrats, (basically if you didnt understand my grammar, this is better than the other ones i played)

Thank you very much!

started playing, so good, very very nice job

I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you!

whats this update for?

I added some pictures from chapter 7 and updated the old ones from chapter 1.

oh ok

did it send out a notice that something changed??

Yeah but it didnt say.

Its probably already been mentioned, but the threesome scene (evening after the will reading) the protaganist looks positively green. (Android tablet, version 7.)

First sex scene with Apple, you might want to consider a slightly different POV so that her hair doesnt interfere with the scene quite so much.

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I am slowly going over the older animations to make them better and better quality.

Thank you.

you should make a logo for your game tab btw, make it something meaningful to the game or you. i get lost when hurry picking the game i want to play and pick another one. idk if anyone else has that issue but a logo would help you stand out also.

What do you mean by a logo ?

most games have there own logo like My New Family has lucy or lil cat for there.

i think i got it

pick whatever you want, i know itll be good. btw who is chapter 8 gonna focus on, just a hint is all i ask lol.

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I willingly paid $5 for this game. The erotic scenes are lack-luster compared to some other games, but I was laughing the whole damn time I was playing this. I wish the MC looked a bit more attractive, but damn is he a beast

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Thank you for purchasing, that is much appreciated. This is my first ever AVN that I have created, and I am still learning. Very glad you were able to get some enjoyment out of it, there is going to be a new chapter released in a day or two (so come back for more laughs I hope). Yes, he is sort of average looking if we ever get to see his face.

Thank you.

unable to load any saves.
hoping an error log will help diagnose the problems i and others are having with this release:

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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 452, in __call__

    renpy.load(fn)

Exception: Couldn't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script

    python hide:

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute

    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode

    exec(bytecode, globals, locals)

  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in <module>

    python hide:

  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 35, in _execute_python_hide

    ui.interact()

  File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3213, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 4037, in interact_core

    rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 48, in event

    return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st) # E1101

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 720, in event

    rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1249, in event

    rv = super(Window, self).event(ev, x, y, st)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event

    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1249, in event

    rv = super(Window, self).event(ev, x, y, st)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event

    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1059, in event

    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)

  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event

    rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)

  File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 979, in event

    return handle_click(self.clicked)

  File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 914, in handle_click

    rv = run(action)

  File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 329, in run

    return action(*args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 452, in __call__

    renpy.load(fn)

  File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 769, in load

    log.unfreeze(roots, label="_after_load")

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2173, in unfreeze

    self.rollback(0, force=True, label=label, greedy=greedy, on_load=True)

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2005, in rollback

    self.load_failed()

  File "renpy/python.py", line 1923, in load_failed

    raise Exception("Couldn't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?")

Exception: Couldn't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?

Windows-10-10.0.19041

Ren'Py 7.4.5.1648

Almost Dead 0.6

Tue Jul  6 14:08:03 2021

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Are these save games from this version 0.6 if they are from older versions that could be the reason

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in my case, the save games are from 0.5 i actually had the same 'fix' as the last dude - re-unzipping the files, and saving it over the first lot of unzipped files.. then i was able to open the save games...
the save files are still from 0.5 (of course renpy saves are in the separate windows appdata folder, so they werent modified by this process) but are now working for me.
i just figured you'd like to know more about the issue, so i posted the log for your benefit.

There was a change from .5 to .6 on where the save games were stored. The directory name changed because I had it configured incorrectly.

I get the same error when I copy the save folder from .7 to .8. Since there are 2 locations with the saves (appdata and game folder) I am not sure what the proper way would be to transfer the saves. Any help would be appreciated.

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Cant wait bud, keep it up!!

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Whats up loading screen whether I sex scene diaglog scene it freezes up at spot.

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yr device is catholic

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it would seem your sense of humour is also catholic :D 

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I don't know what to tell you. I downloaded the "Almost Dead-0.6" version from here just now, and it works perfectly. If you downloaded from a different website then I can't do anything.

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Glad you got it working.

Enjoy.

Stay safe!

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How many girls are there total? And i was wondering when you are gonna do a chapter on the one night in the hospital? like did i miss something?

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Since I have written up to chapter-9 there are a total of 7 different women available to join the harem, 2 will be optional.

If you mean the night with Christe, don't worry, we will see her again.

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that's what I'm waiting for.

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Which of these downloads are the newest android version?

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All 4 android versions are the latest

arm64 is for newer devices, v7a is for older devices, x86 is for chrome devices and Universal should work for all devices!

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Thank you for telling me since I want to download the game but didn't know which one to download. 

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You're welcome

That post means the new update isnt out yet

That is correct, but I am working hard to get the next chapter completed, so I can release it maybe another few weeks. I try to post dev logs every Monday-ish and release images that I have rendered on Patreon the day after I render them.

ok cool. Ty.

Is it just me or does it feel like there's a part missing between chapter 3 and 4?

Please elaborate.

It feels like there was a development between the Main Character and Tina, and between Q&A and Tina that was skipped over, almost like there was a day or two missing between chapter 3 and 4. But that might just be me.

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it should be fixed with v0.4.1

Sorry about that!

Read the first 3 chapters - really enjoying this!

Thank you.

There should be another chapter out in a few weeks! (hopefully)

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The game window appears...then immediately closes. Can't play the game. I tried both  .exe versions.

RenPy the underlying program I'm using for this requires:

"It is now required that a user's computer have OpenGL 2, DirectX 9, OpenGL ES 2, or WebGL to run Ren'Py. The model-based renderer requires OpenGL ES 3 or WebGL 2.

With these changes, there have been a few deprecations. Ren'Py no longer runs
on Windows XP."

  1. Hold down Shift while starting Ren'Py, or press Shift+G once Ren'Py has started.
  2. From the "Graphics Acceleration" menu that appears, choose the renderer to use.
  3. Choose "Quit", then restart Ren'Py.

Try those, failing that I can't really help you.

I tried holding shift while opening the game (even tho it should not be necessary since I have windows 10, not XP), and I get the choice between "Automatically choose", "Force GL Renderer", "Force ANGLE Renderer", "Force GL2 Renderer", and "Force ANGLE2 Renderer". Seeing as what you put before, I tried to click on Force GL2 Renderer, as that is what should be needed. Immediately after clicking on it, the window closed (I could not click on quit). Trying to start the game gives still the same problem and holding shift while starting the game gives me the window again with "Choose automatically" selected.

Have you played other Renpy games? Did you try the other render options? The only thing I can find is it maybe your graphic driver needs updating. https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/display_problems.html

I tried all the different render options to no avail. I also looked for and updated my driver the last time I tried this out. Altho I have to say, funnily enough, I was in the options, and I thought, why not and disabled the "Controller" option. Lo and behold it works now with just that disabled...

Stupid computers!

Glad you got it working!!

Very nice work. I want to see more

Thank you!

We are in a 2-week lock down here, so hopefully I can get a lot  of images rendered and do another release!!

very good so far, cant wait until next update.

Thank you!

Chapter 2 should be out in about 2 months time (Feb-2021)

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